To Nandita …whose poems deluge me with emotions…sending loads of smiles to u…
Wandering in the woods I met a broken heart
I asked it ” why have u fallen apart?”
She cried at me with her tears
“let me be still For I now fear…
Fear to be around anyone so near”
Drifting around I saw her snuggling her torment
I asked it “Why do u give up on your fate”
She looked at me with her longing
“let me be still for it’s hard forgetting…
Forgetting the memories so unforgiving”
Wrenching out I pulled my tattered soul to her
I asked it ” What of this you infer ? “
She approached to it contemplating
“let me be still for it’s so fragile to touch
Touch only for it may not survive my clutch”
Smiling , I pushed my shredded soul forward
Unsteadily the fragments of which swayed clung to one another
She asked with surprise “you are so damaged inward “
I stood silent waiting for the pieces to answer
Inundating her with its wounded memories
My soul walked back into me…
She stood silent in awe
Light in every broken portion was what she saw
Filled with hopefulness , life breathes into that damaged core
For the broken does not stay broken long
Failures and Mistakes were what makes it strong
Only if it was to move on…and on
The-Perfect-I stood now naked with imperfections
Beside stood my tattered soul beholding affections
Wiping tears, the-broken-heart rose up
Realized that she was no more broken
Beaming with tenacity, she moved
Like a fallen warrior she roared
“It was only she who defined her”
Never to fall back…Never to stumble again
She rode far far away, then…!!!
PS : anyone reading this…post a smiley in Nandita’s blog….just only a smiley in any of her post…
Beautiful expression 🙂
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Thank you for reading 🙂
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This is such a sweet gesture! 😊❤
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Thanks so much Ellen…Hopefully it ll work 🙂
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Hello. I’ve nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award. You can play if you want or not. It’s your choice. For instructions, check this. 😀 https://dronstadblog.wordpress.com/2018/01/03/mystery-blogger-award-2
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Thank you so much…Sure I will play… 🙂
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Each line was beautifully used. Keep up with great work man.👍
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Thanks so much Zakir 🙂
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I can feel a knot in my throat..
Very beautiful lines.
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Thanks Amrita 🙂
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nicely written
awesome
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This is so precious! You spread so many smiles 🙂 🙂
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a poetry of hope
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Thank you so much for ur kind words 🙂
Glad that u liked
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You are very welcome, I sure did like! 🙂
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🙂
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Just one smily ? All my smile is hers now.
Shoumodip I am humbled by the kindness and sweetness you have shown to my friend. People like you are rare gem. I love each and every word of your verse. Keep up the good work 🙂
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Thanks Sameera for your kind words… 🙂
PS : I admire ur friendship
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and I admire your efforts 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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Pleasure. 🙂
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🙂
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This is just lovely!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Oh WOW! That’s all I can say. How original and inventive. I LOVE it
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Reblogged this on A Tangle of Weeds and commented:
Kindness, such a rare virtue! Thank you so much for this very touching and heartfelt gesture. It gave me a lump in my throat.
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I m humbled N….
Let no worry touch your soul…let your poems start our days and mark our nights…
stay blessed !!!
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Beautiful 🙂
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Thanks Soiba 🙂
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This is awesome. Dealing with a broken heart sucks but without it, we would be unable to appreciate true love. Great poem, as usual😉
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Thanks so much..yeah broken heart are the ones that can feel the truest love 🙂
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Wow. Lovely !
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Thanks Ayesha 🙂
PS : pls send smiles to Nandita
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I do hope she feels better soon ☺
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So do I hope 🙂
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